Alanna and I agreed that... since you were taking a really long time to put up the new chappie... Alanna and I were getting impatient, so we decided that if you didn't get on by 8:45 Anshu would get to post the post she had written... And you didn't... so she posted... but she said she was pretty much taking Lorcan out of the running and letting him instead by Lvira's good friend who she could go to for comfort and support. Sorry... they're still at school, though, and so you can continue and place the new chapter in pretty much the same way.
Please hurry, since I don't really want to have to get all impatient again...
Sunday, March 15, 2009
PLOT TWIST BY THE NOBLE ME
Lvira was confused.
Very confused.
She absentmindedly looked out the window.
She had never been too into boys-she was always the punk girl that didn’t take any crap from boys. But the dark stranger had intrigued her….and for some reason; she found it hard to think clearly. She always thought that those promiscuous girls at school who wore tiny skirts and put on makeup were pathetic, but now she was blushing like a schoolgirl, and her heart was beating fast.
But she also liked Lorcan…but in a different way, like he was her brother, the one that would always be there for her, always be ready with a hug when she needed it…like she did that afternoon.
With a small shock, she realized that she loved Lorcan.
But not romantically-as a friend, the closest friend of her heart.
He probably also felt this way-her time with him was not romantic at all, but sweet in another way-the pure, simple love of friendship.
They finally got back to the school.
Jennifer was the first to reach her.
“You skanky slut! How dare you touch MY boyfriend! He’s mine, you stupid bitch, MINE!” She screamed into Lvira’s face. She suddenly slapped her face. “That’s what you deserve, and more!” She sneered.
Lvira felt an angry heat surge up in her face. Who did this $*%($ think she was?
So when Jennifer reached up to slap her again, she grabbed her arm and twisted it up her back, until she was screaming in pain.
“Let go of me, you little bitch!”
She let go…but pinched her vindictively to leave her with a reminder.
She walked slowly over to the back of the building. After a while, she heard footsteps, and looked up. Lorcan was leaning on a wall, silently gazing at her.
“We need to talk.”
She met his eyes. “Yes. We do.”
He started talking, with a sense of urgency.
“Lvira, I really think I love you. I’ve never felt this way about anyone else before, and I really think you’re the one. I know you probably only think of me as a friend, but I really need to tell you before I explode.”
Lvira blinked. This was NOT how she wanted it to go.
“Lorcan…I love you, but just as a friend. You’re the best friend that I ever had, but I only think of you that way. I’m sorry…but I think I like someone else.”
Lorcan smiled sadly. “I didn’t think I had a chance. But can we still be friends?”
Lvira hugged him impulsively. “Yes. We’ll be friends. Nothing will ever change that.”
He hugged her back. “No,” he agreed. “Nothing can change that.”
Wednesday, March 11, 2009
Quick New Rule
One More Rule!
Sorry Guys.
But...
Rule is....
Rivals cannot come in until Chapter 9. In Chapter 9 Rivals may come in. And Jennifer is not an official rival, although she will act in the same way. And Anshu, you may not make Jennifer attach to someone else unless circumstances make me change this rule.
Also, you may only introduce one rival per Chappie.
Also, we will be chaptering in this order- Elizabeth, Me, Anshu. Do not change this order.
Bye!
Sorry Guys.
But...
Rule is....
Rivals cannot come in until Chapter 9. In Chapter 9 Rivals may come in. And Jennifer is not an official rival, although she will act in the same way. And Anshu, you may not make Jennifer attach to someone else unless circumstances make me change this rule.
Also, you may only introduce one rival per Chappie.
Also, we will be chaptering in this order- Elizabeth, Me, Anshu. Do not change this order.
Bye!
Monday, March 9, 2009
Another chapter
Lvira ran into the restaurant, blinded by tears. Why me? How could they? ran through her head. She curled up in a corner.
And sobbed uncontrollably.
Soon, she felt arms around her, stroking her hair, murmuring comforting words in her ear.
"It's okay, 'Vira. Everything'll be fine." Lorcan's voice murmured.
She turned into his embrace, limp, and broken. "It won't ever be okay again, Lorcan. I almost got raped." Her voice was a soft croak.
He stiffened. "What?"
Lvira was too tired to be snippy. She simply nodded. "That alley outside. A stranger saved me."
Lorcan's eyes filled with despair and self-loathing. "I can't believe I wasn't there for you. I should have been there. I should have done something. I'm so sorry, Lvira."
"You didn't know. I'll be all right." She managed a weak smile.
He hesitated, and nodded. "Let's go back to the school, okay? I'll always be there if you need anything, Vira."
"Okay. Thanks, Lorcan."
He answered by gently kissing her forehead. She closed her eyes. An electric tingle just spread from her forehead to her heart-it was going crazy.
He smiled faintly.
"Come on, let's go."
And sobbed uncontrollably.
Soon, she felt arms around her, stroking her hair, murmuring comforting words in her ear.
"It's okay, 'Vira. Everything'll be fine." Lorcan's voice murmured.
She turned into his embrace, limp, and broken. "It won't ever be okay again, Lorcan. I almost got raped." Her voice was a soft croak.
He stiffened. "What?"
Lvira was too tired to be snippy. She simply nodded. "That alley outside. A stranger saved me."
Lorcan's eyes filled with despair and self-loathing. "I can't believe I wasn't there for you. I should have been there. I should have done something. I'm so sorry, Lvira."
"You didn't know. I'll be all right." She managed a weak smile.
He hesitated, and nodded. "Let's go back to the school, okay? I'll always be there if you need anything, Vira."
"Okay. Thanks, Lorcan."
He answered by gently kissing her forehead. She closed her eyes. An electric tingle just spread from her forehead to her heart-it was going crazy.
He smiled faintly.
"Come on, let's go."
Sunday, March 8, 2009
MUAHAHAHAHA
AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Now shall ensue the power battle!
The three authors of this story...
Shall have an epic battle....
To make Lvira love someone of the author's choice!
Each of us will have a boy to try to make Lvira fall in love.
And so shall ensue the power struggle!
Which I shall win, since I type long chapters... lol.
Good luck, all!
I'll be rooting for... me! lol.
Remember to add angst,
School romance,
Fantastical elements,
And battles to the death! (And a few battles to just the end of the battle:P)
Good Luck!
Develop your boy fully so that you can try to convince the others to adore your boy,
and possibly help you!
You are not allowed to tamper with other's boys.
You can help make them seem better, though, if you decide that one boy seems to be doing well and you want to support them.
Also, don't make your boys Mary-Sues!
They have to have at least some flaws.
So let it now... BEGIN!!!!
EDIT~!!!
Also, you can make potential rivals for the other's author's boys. Feel free to make these rivals very good, although not Mary-Sue-ish. That wouldn't be fun. And only one rival per boy. So after you make the rival, no one else can. But don't introduce the rivals too soon! And Jennifer doesn't count as a rival.
Now shall ensue the power battle!
The three authors of this story...
Shall have an epic battle....
To make Lvira love someone of the author's choice!
Each of us will have a boy to try to make Lvira fall in love.
And so shall ensue the power struggle!
Which I shall win, since I type long chapters... lol.
Good luck, all!
I'll be rooting for... me! lol.
Remember to add angst,
School romance,
Fantastical elements,
And battles to the death! (And a few battles to just the end of the battle:P)
Good Luck!
Develop your boy fully so that you can try to convince the others to adore your boy,
and possibly help you!
You are not allowed to tamper with other's boys.
You can help make them seem better, though, if you decide that one boy seems to be doing well and you want to support them.
Also, don't make your boys Mary-Sues!
They have to have at least some flaws.
So let it now... BEGIN!!!!
EDIT~!!!
Also, you can make potential rivals for the other's author's boys. Feel free to make these rivals very good, although not Mary-Sue-ish. That wouldn't be fun. And only one rival per boy. So after you make the rival, no one else can. But don't introduce the rivals too soon! And Jennifer doesn't count as a rival.
Saturday, March 7, 2009
Oh yeah...
Oh yeah, I wanted to mention, the stranger is a few months older than Lvira, making him a possible love contestant.
From this point on, the story will no longer have anything else to do with my dreams. Unless I choose otherwise in one of my chappies. And remember to add some magic at some point, since I intended for this to be fantastical... But no overload and no easy-peasy-lemon-squeazy wins agains big bad monsters, either. Every fight must be difficult, unless you chose to have someone fight someone extremely inferior. And try to explain battles in explicit detail.
Ooh... I want to type the next chapter... darn... oh well. I'll just keep it in my head...
From this point on, the story will no longer have anything else to do with my dreams. Unless I choose otherwise in one of my chappies. And remember to add some magic at some point, since I intended for this to be fantastical... But no overload and no easy-peasy-lemon-squeazy wins agains big bad monsters, either. Every fight must be difficult, unless you chose to have someone fight someone extremely inferior. And try to explain battles in explicit detail.
Ooh... I want to type the next chapter... darn... oh well. I'll just keep it in my head...
Third Chappie (lol)
The van pulled into a fancy restraunt, with grapevines and potted flowers and marble columns and all that. Then the van drove off, leaving the 2 couples and one punk/goth dressed girl, and guess what happened?
"Uh..." Damir emptied his pockets. "Where'd my money go?"
"I thought you had it." Lorcan replied uneasily.
"Well, I'm pretty sure that I brought money, and Monique was supposed to bring backup money..."
Monique, Damir's girlfried, replied in a shrill tone, "I only brought 5 dollars for a few souvenirs!"
"Oh no, what are we going to do?" squealed Jennifer, Lorcan's girlfriend.
Damir stood their, scratching his dark curls which were slightly longer than average, nearly hiding his chestnut brown eyes, when he turned to... oh no...
Lvira.
Everyone else turned, as well. Monique, who had short-but-straight dark hair and dark skin like Damir decided to say it.
"Will you pay for us Lvira? Please pretty please with a cherry on top with whipped cream?"
Lvira thought, I don't like whipped cream... but said aloud, "Fine..." and took out a small card with a smaller pressed white flower and handed it to Lorcan.
"Thanks." he muttered, then three of them went into the restraunt. Only small, lithe, and overly sexy Jennnifer stayed outside.
"I caught you looking at him, you know. How dare you flirt with my boyfriend?" a dark, menacing aura had overtaken the small blonde. Her hair was straight in the top, then after it went over her ears it curled in wide ringlets about the size of one's pam, reaching her chest.
"What?" Lvira was puzzled.
"Don't 'what' me, you whore! I know you were flirting with him. Why else would he stop making out with mwah and talk to little old you?"
Lvira was miffed. I'm hardly old, she thought, in fact I'm younger than you even if I'm taller!
"Well, come on, anyways. I'm getting cold. Don't you dare talk to my boyfriend, slut!" She giggled at the last word, and suddenly the menacing aura was gone and she was skipping inside. Lvira followed.
Inside was lavishly decorated, and Lvira winced. There goes my money that I saved for 5 weeks... she thought.
At the table, they all ordered food (which costed even more money than Lvira had thought) and while they were waiting for the bill and dessert, Lvira decided she couldn't take any more of the feeding-each-other-while-making-'say aaahh'-noises and the kissing-and-then-mentioning-how-lovely-the-other-was and all the rest of the crap. She said firmly, "I'm going outside for some fresh air and maybe a bit of shopping, don't go off anywhere, I'll give you cash to pay for the rest of the bill instead." and she pulled from a large pouch slung on her side a smaller pouch filled with coins and dollar bills.
"Here." she said shortly, dumping the pouch on the table.
Then, gathering up her card, she whisked herself out of the door, and after a few minutes of hard walking, she paused and sat down, panting heavily.
Despite that, though, she still jumped nearly a mile when a drunked voice slurred, "Well, lookie here, it's a chic!"
Lvira instantly jumped to her feet, and saw a small group of men with empty bottles in their hands surrounding her.
"What're you doin', chic like you, out here in our ter-tory?" said the obvious leader.
Lvira tensed, not knowing what they wanted.
"Well, nev'r mind'at. Right now, you'll do what'ee wantya ta do."
Too late, Lvira realized what they were going to do. "The he--" she was cut off as one of the men slammed her into the wall. Then another man came up, and they held her struggling form down as the leader came up.
"Aw, c'mon, cutie, don't struggle." the leader mumbled in her face, his nose only centimeters away from hers. She could smell the strong alcohol on his breath.
Just as he was about to close in and steal her first kiss, suddenly he groaned, and fell over sideways, clutching his side.
"What the hell are you doing?" a voice, dark and mysterious, rang out through the alley. Lvira looked up, and saw a tall, lean figure towering over her, his face in shadow. The men fled, leaving Lvira crumpled on the floor with the figure looking down at her.
Lvira was trembling from the possible trauma, and she fainted.
The stranger gathered her up in his arms, bridal-style, and carried her to the restraunt, where he happened to know she'd come from, having seen her exit earlier.
The other 4 were exiting just then, and they saw Lvira, unconscious in the stranger's arms, although not for long.
She stirred, and the stranger set her down.
"Um... thank you?" Lvira was still dizzy and uncertain, and she stared at the stranger.
"You're welcome." He replied simply.
"Lvira!" cried Lorcan, to the irritation of Jennifer.
"Lorcan...?" she murmured, surprised, and then she swayed around to see him.
He had sprinted up, and stopped right before her. "I... I'm glad you're safe." Lorcan muttered, suddenly looking down.
Lvira didn't like the tense atmosphere, so she turned around again and said, "Thank you... er... what's your name?" she could sense Lorcan's irritation now as well as Jennifer's but she chose to ignore it.
"Me? I don't have a name." replied the stranger.
"What?!" the people all stared at him in shock.
I typed for too long............ anyways, either Valorona or Alanna can post the 4th chappie. And... this was based off of last night's dream. Cuz I'd had a dream that I was accompanying two friends (only my friends were boys, and they don't fit the descriptions because I changed the appearances) to a restraunt to do matchmaking, then I left them alone to go shopping for books, then I got waylaid by 3 drunk men, then right before the leader was about to start he was kicked in the side by the person I like... and then the person carried me, unconscious, back to the restraunt... which was Olive Gardens, by the way, leading to the grapevines... and then I woke up there, and then from the 'wakes up' part on the rest is false, spun by my waking head for solely the story. Instead, in the dream, one of the boys said, "We can have a triple date now!" and then before I could react they'd pulled him and me to the next part of the 'date' which was supposed to be shopping.
"Uh..." Damir emptied his pockets. "Where'd my money go?"
"I thought you had it." Lorcan replied uneasily.
"Well, I'm pretty sure that I brought money, and Monique was supposed to bring backup money..."
Monique, Damir's girlfried, replied in a shrill tone, "I only brought 5 dollars for a few souvenirs!"
"Oh no, what are we going to do?" squealed Jennifer, Lorcan's girlfriend.
Damir stood their, scratching his dark curls which were slightly longer than average, nearly hiding his chestnut brown eyes, when he turned to... oh no...
Lvira.
Everyone else turned, as well. Monique, who had short-but-straight dark hair and dark skin like Damir decided to say it.
"Will you pay for us Lvira? Please pretty please with a cherry on top with whipped cream?"
Lvira thought, I don't like whipped cream... but said aloud, "Fine..." and took out a small card with a smaller pressed white flower and handed it to Lorcan.
"Thanks." he muttered, then three of them went into the restraunt. Only small, lithe, and overly sexy Jennnifer stayed outside.
"I caught you looking at him, you know. How dare you flirt with my boyfriend?" a dark, menacing aura had overtaken the small blonde. Her hair was straight in the top, then after it went over her ears it curled in wide ringlets about the size of one's pam, reaching her chest.
"What?" Lvira was puzzled.
"Don't 'what' me, you whore! I know you were flirting with him. Why else would he stop making out with mwah and talk to little old you?"
Lvira was miffed. I'm hardly old, she thought, in fact I'm younger than you even if I'm taller!
"Well, come on, anyways. I'm getting cold. Don't you dare talk to my boyfriend, slut!" She giggled at the last word, and suddenly the menacing aura was gone and she was skipping inside. Lvira followed.
Inside was lavishly decorated, and Lvira winced. There goes my money that I saved for 5 weeks... she thought.
At the table, they all ordered food (which costed even more money than Lvira had thought) and while they were waiting for the bill and dessert, Lvira decided she couldn't take any more of the feeding-each-other-while-making-'say aaahh'-noises and the kissing-and-then-mentioning-how-lovely-the-other-was and all the rest of the crap. She said firmly, "I'm going outside for some fresh air and maybe a bit of shopping, don't go off anywhere, I'll give you cash to pay for the rest of the bill instead." and she pulled from a large pouch slung on her side a smaller pouch filled with coins and dollar bills.
"Here." she said shortly, dumping the pouch on the table.
Then, gathering up her card, she whisked herself out of the door, and after a few minutes of hard walking, she paused and sat down, panting heavily.
Despite that, though, she still jumped nearly a mile when a drunked voice slurred, "Well, lookie here, it's a chic!"
Lvira instantly jumped to her feet, and saw a small group of men with empty bottles in their hands surrounding her.
"What're you doin', chic like you, out here in our ter-tory?" said the obvious leader.
Lvira tensed, not knowing what they wanted.
"Well, nev'r mind'at. Right now, you'll do what'ee wantya ta do."
Too late, Lvira realized what they were going to do. "The he--" she was cut off as one of the men slammed her into the wall. Then another man came up, and they held her struggling form down as the leader came up.
"Aw, c'mon, cutie, don't struggle." the leader mumbled in her face, his nose only centimeters away from hers. She could smell the strong alcohol on his breath.
Just as he was about to close in and steal her first kiss, suddenly he groaned, and fell over sideways, clutching his side.
"What the hell are you doing?" a voice, dark and mysterious, rang out through the alley. Lvira looked up, and saw a tall, lean figure towering over her, his face in shadow. The men fled, leaving Lvira crumpled on the floor with the figure looking down at her.
Lvira was trembling from the possible trauma, and she fainted.
The stranger gathered her up in his arms, bridal-style, and carried her to the restraunt, where he happened to know she'd come from, having seen her exit earlier.
The other 4 were exiting just then, and they saw Lvira, unconscious in the stranger's arms, although not for long.
She stirred, and the stranger set her down.
"Um... thank you?" Lvira was still dizzy and uncertain, and she stared at the stranger.
"You're welcome." He replied simply.
"Lvira!" cried Lorcan, to the irritation of Jennifer.
"Lorcan...?" she murmured, surprised, and then she swayed around to see him.
He had sprinted up, and stopped right before her. "I... I'm glad you're safe." Lorcan muttered, suddenly looking down.
Lvira didn't like the tense atmosphere, so she turned around again and said, "Thank you... er... what's your name?" she could sense Lorcan's irritation now as well as Jennifer's but she chose to ignore it.
"Me? I don't have a name." replied the stranger.
"What?!" the people all stared at him in shock.
I typed for too long............ anyways, either Valorona or Alanna can post the 4th chappie. And... this was based off of last night's dream. Cuz I'd had a dream that I was accompanying two friends (only my friends were boys, and they don't fit the descriptions because I changed the appearances) to a restraunt to do matchmaking, then I left them alone to go shopping for books, then I got waylaid by 3 drunk men, then right before the leader was about to start he was kicked in the side by the person I like... and then the person carried me, unconscious, back to the restraunt... which was Olive Gardens, by the way, leading to the grapevines... and then I woke up there, and then from the 'wakes up' part on the rest is false, spun by my waking head for solely the story. Instead, in the dream, one of the boys said, "We can have a triple date now!" and then before I could react they'd pulled him and me to the next part of the 'date' which was supposed to be shopping.
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